Rain cause accident ( Park, Chul Hyun)

Yesterday, a fellow student, Jim Parks, had an accident near the corner of Route 397 and Kennedy. At 3:00 P.M., he was riding a motorbike along the Route 397. At Kennedy Street , he turned right and his motorbike skidded on wet pavement . At that time, he found a car against him and surprised. First, He turned his handle to the sidewalk quickly. Then he knocked over pedestrians and his motorbike was dented. After moments, the police arrived at 3:04 P.M. The police investigated about injured people, most of pedestrians reported that they were not injured except one person who was his arm bruised. The police took him to General Hospital for examination.

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Yesterday, a fellow student, Jim Parks, had an accident near the corner of Route 397 and Kennedy. At 3:00 P.M., he was riding a motorbike along the Route 397. At Kennedy Street , he turned right and his motorbike skidded on wet pavement . At that time, he found a car against him and was surprised. First, he turned his handle to the sidewalk quickly. Then he knocked over pedestrians and his motorbike was dented. After moments, the police arrived at 3:04 P.M. The police investigated about injured people, most pedestrians reported that they were not injured except one person whose arm was bruised.(The previous sentence sould actually be revised anddivided into 2 parts or have some relative pronoun added) The police took him to General Hospital for examination.