accident Edgar (pepe)

This afternoon Jim Park had an accident near to Kennedy Street. At 3:00 p.m, he was riding his motorcycle down 397 route in the snow. At kennedy Street, he turned right, and the car skidded on a patch of ice. First, he hit the car who was passing at the same time. On the side walk, Angela and Jordan were walking(comma) and Jim hit them too, after that, the police arrived, Angela said " I'm not injured, and my arm is bruised" and Jim said "don't worry about it, my mother is a doctor, I will take you at the hospital". Angela and Jim were talking while they walked to the hospital, but Angela felt a lot of pain and Jim took her arm and touch her, she felt different.(You have a run-on sentence here. Add some more punctuation.)