A Historic Event (eun hyoung Yoo)

Charles Lindbergh, a pilot, was taking off at 7:57 p.m, It was on May 20, 1927.
He did not have any parachutes or radioes in his plane.
He flew over New york, Nova scotia, and New foundland. He accossed the Atlantic Ocean by flight. It took 33hours and 30 minites. It was 3,600 miles.
Lindbergh landed at le bourget airport which is located Paris, France. That time was May 21, 10:22p.m.
When he arrived(preposition and article) airport, 1000,000 peaple greeted him.
Charles Lindbergh was given a medal. He became articlenew national hero.
He was the first nonstop solo transatlantic flight, so he became a symbol of aviation. (He wasn't a flight. He was the first to make the flight.)


(Second draft)
Charles Lindbergh, a pilot, was taking off at 7:57 p.m. It was on May 20, 1927.
He did not have any parachutes or radios in his plane, because he had to make the flight's weight lighter.
He flew over New york, Nova scotia, and New foundland. It took 33hours and 30 minites for 3,600 miles.
Lindbergh landed at Le Bourget airport which is located in Paris, France. That time was May 21, 10:22p.m.
When he arrived at the airport, 100,000 people greeted him.
Charles Lindbergh was given a medal. His news was reported in The New York Times newspaper. He became a new national hero.
He was the first nonstop solo transatlantic pilot , so he became a symbol of aviation.


(Main idea)
Charles Lindbergh was the first nonstop solo transatlantic pilot.