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There are some differences and similarities between

Exam Review

Study pages 106-108, 116-117, 118-119, 121, 126-128, 130-131, 133, 144

Your exam will be a comparison and contrast composition. You will need to be able to use the patterns we studied in unit 4. Review the sample compositions to get ideas for how to make interesting paragraphs.

Ryan Kong "I Am a Butterfly"

I am a butterfly. It took me a long time to be a beautiful butterfly. Now I have gotten free. I can fly whenever I want and I can go wherever I want. Even though I am a weak thing, I am happy. I love floating in the air and like to suck sweet water from flowers. (Great!--If you can add a few more sentences to this, I will consider publishing it in NEW AND DIFFERENT VOICES lizine.blogspot.com!)

Ryan Kong "Wedding Anniversary Day"

If you can look at this picture and could be given some information.(fragment) This is a picture of GunWoo’s family. As you can see in this picture, they traveled the East Europe in Russia last vacation. On their trip, they stayed at Mr. Pienkowski’s Bed and Breakfast Inn to take some rest. It was very fine day of late summer and their wedding anniversary. When his wife and boy, they both were looking ^green trees, flying birds and blue sky through out the window in their room, he gave her a bundle of flowers. a good start

Family (eunhyoungYoo)

On July 4, 2005, it is not only Independence Day but also Mr. and Mrs. Smiths’ fifth Wedding Memorial day. So Mr. Smith, Mrs. Smith, and Jack who is their son are visiting in Seattle where they met first. They planned to visit in Seattle for 3days, because they want to remember their love.
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On July 4, 2005, it is not only Independence Day but also Mr. and Mrs. Smiths’ fifth wedding anniversary. So Mr. Smith, Mrs. Smith, and Jack who is their son are visiting in Seattle where they met at the first. They planned to visit in Seattle for 3days, because they want to remember their love. Mr. Smith gave her wife flowers for wedding anniversary. So Mrs. Smith was very happy.
The big parade of Independence Day is held. The family wants to see at the outside. But they couldn't. Because they were very tired from traveling. So they decided to see the parade through the window. Mr. Smith's son is very excited. Both Mr. Smith and Mrs. Smith are also very pleased.

In-class writing practice test(park, chul hyun)

My close Russian friend, Mr. Pienkowski went on a wedding celebration trip to Tijuana, Mexico in summer with his family. He sent me a letter with a photo which was taken with his family in front of a window in^Bed and Breakfast Inn at noon. In the photo, his wife had some flowers which could be received from him and it seemed that his sincerity toutched her heart. They both seemed happy with fullness of love, but his son and cat both looked like boring. I think it must be bored to his son because it is not a trip for his son, but for^ wedding celebration.

describe the picture

Mr. Smith's family is enjoying the traveling. The travel is in memory of Mrs. Smith's 33th birthday. Her birthday is August 2th, today. They went^ Florida yesterday. -to be continue........

On July 8, a wonderfull day in New York. The Corleone family are in Mr. Pienkowski's Bed and Breakfast inn. The Corleone family are looking at the window becouse the man brought a serenade for his wife. ^Is her birthday, and her daughter

Homework Due Monday

Imagine that you are this butterfly or something else in nature
and describe what you feel, can do, and look like. Try to use some of the vocabulary and patterns you have learned in your writing, reading, and grammar classes this session.
Begin with "I am a..."

In-class writing practice test

This family is in Mr. Pienkowski's Bed and Breakfast Inn. Listen to the questions on the audio and then write a paragraph about the family in this picture. Add a main idea sentence and details to your answers. Use the patterns below in your writing. The questions will help give you ideas. Post your paragraph on this team weblog.
1. could or might be
2. a preposition of place
3. a preposition of time
4. both...and...
5. because or when
6. passive form of a verb

Norma comparison

Sara and Tony both have a car, but their cars a very different, not only in brands, colors, and designs. Sara take cares^ his car, but Tony doesn’t. Their cars are sedan, have car top carrier, are Ford, but, the cars are very different; for example, Tony’s car looks in very bad conditions, the windows and the head light are broken, and the car is dented. Sara’s car looks like new. Use plurals for sedan, carrier, Ford

Tony's car and Sara's car( eunhyoungYoo)

Tony and Sara live in America. The public transportation is not developed well in America. So a person who doesn't have a car cannot move easily.
Tony and Sara have their cars. Both Tony and Sara have cars made by the same company, Ford.
Their cars have car top carriers because they have to load their big luggage. Their cars are sedans which have four wheels.
There are several differences that their cars have. One is color. Tony’s car is silver, but Sara’s car is black. Another is size. Tony’s car is bigger than Sara’s.
The most difference thing is condition; you can see that easily.
Tony’s car is very old. Moreover he didn’t fix his car. The window is cracked. The headlight is broken. Fenders seem to come off. He has to fix the car.
On the contrary, Sara’s car is new. The car is put in good order. Sara is washing her car every day so her car is bright always.
When you see Sara’s car, you will certainly like to ride in her car.

comparing and contrasting(park, chul hyun)

Tony and Sara have moved in Atlanta at the same time. Above all, they need a car. So, they went to a car dealer. Sara had $20,000, but Tony had only $2,000; therefore, Sara bought a new car, but Tony bought a used one. Both of their cars have several similarities; they are made by Ford, the same model, and have a car top carrier. However, at the same time, both of them have several differences; Sara's car is colored by brilliant red, but The painting of Tony's car peeled off completely. Sara's car has a good appearance. In contrast, Tony's car has a bad look; it has broken windows, broken headlights, a dented fender, and so on. But they are both happy to buy their own car.

Eunmi

I have two friends. Their names are Tony and Sara. There are three similarities and differences between them.
^Similiarities are both have same brand. It is ford and it is^same style. It is called sedan. Also they travel a lot. So both have a car top carrier. But now I like to tell there are three differences between them.
^Differences are

comparing & contrasting

There are two friends. One is Tony and the other is Sara. Both have a car. But their cars have some similarities and differences. The one of similarity that both are ^^same company, Ford. And both have a cartop carrier. Tony's car is color of white, big and old thing. But Tony's car is rusty. I think the car is a scrapped car. I wonder how the car is move. And the car's windows, fender, headlights are broken. In addition, he even made an accident yesterday. Maybe, the car cannot run anymore. On the other hand, Sara bought a new car just now. The car is brand new. The car is color of black and smaller than Tony's car. But this is no match for that. She washs her car everyday. She loves her car like pets.
I want^ get in her car. Tony want too, probably.

Ryan Kong(Similarities And Differences)

These are similarities and differences between Tony's and Sara's car. The first similarity is they are made by same company, Ford.^ Second thing is they are sedan style that have 4 doors.^ Last one is they both have cartop carriers, like luggage racks. On the other hand, they have several differences as well. Tony's car seems to be very old. It is dented around the car. Its head lights and car windows are broken. Moreover, the bumper of ^back part is, too. But, Sara's car seems to be^ well-controlled car. (I think you might say a well-maintained car.)

My brother's car. Pepe

I have two brothers, Carlos and Juan Pablo. Both of them have a car. Yesterday, I went to my parent's house. I saw my brothers' car(use plural); therefore, I want to tell about differences between them. Carlos, my older brother, has a nice car. He usually goes to ^car wash because he always wants to see his car clean. Carlos drives very carefully. Therefore, his car doesn't have any scratches. On the other hand, my brother Juan Pablo is messy. He never goes to the car wash. He doesn't care about his car, so his car has broken windows, and broken head lights. I told him, " Please, take care of your car, becouse is very nasty", and he was Ashamed. He swore he is gonna changes his car.

Why Bob Adams Is Healthy(eunhyoungYoo)

Bob Adams has good health. I envy his good health and ^glamorous body. I have never seen his illnesses. I want to learn his secret of his good health.
There are several reasons on Bob's good health.
First of all, he makes regulational life. he wakes up at 7am, and go to bed at 10 pm. He has not only regulational time, but also enought sleeping time. Sleeping is important for us.
Second, he has well balanced meals which includes vegetables, friut, and meat. He never drinks a cup of coffee and alcohol and smokes cigarettes. (with a negative, use or)
Moreover, he works very hard and enjoy it. He gets along well with coworkers and clients. Everyone likes him. He workes with joy.
The most important reason is a regulary exercise. He likes sports very much. His favorite sports are baseball and tenneis. He plays this sports every day afternoon. Exercises are very important for our body.

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