Charles Lindbergh's historic flight(park, chul hyun)

May 20, 1927, at 7:57 P.M., Charles Lindbergh’s airplane took off from the Roosevelt Field in New York city for the first nonstop solo transatlantic flight. He didn’t get a parachute or radio. It flew over Nova Scotia and New Found Land, then flew(preposition) Paris, France. It took 33 and a half hours for 3,600 miles. May 21, at 10:22 P.M., Charles Lindbergh landed at Le Boureet Airport in Paris. There were about 100,000 people greeting him. A mayor of Paris gave him a medal. The following day, he got into the New York Times. The headline was “He became a new national hero and the symbol of aviation.”

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May 20, 1927, at 7:57 P.M., Charles Lindbergh’s airplane took off from the Roosevelt Field in New York City for the first nonstop solo transatlantic flight. It was a sunny day. To reduce his airplain's weight, he took out a parachute and radio. It flew over Nova Scotia and New Found Land, then flew to Paris, France. I think it was a very exciting flight. That's why he was the first man trying to the transatlantic flight. But I think it was also a boring flight at the same time. Because it took 33 and a half hours for 3,600 miles. Sometimes he was sleepy, and he fell in dangerous moments. But there was a fly, and it bothered him. Thus, he can finished his flight successfully. May 21, at 10:22 P.M., Charles Lindbergh landed at Le Boureet Airport in Paris. There were about 100,000 people greeting him. The mayor of Paris gave him a medal. The following day, he got into the New York Times. “He became a new national hero and the symbol of aviation.” It was the headline. He became a real national hero.